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Heart ache

I'am he who dewales
in the dark I'll tell you
where I end but never
where I start I'll bring you
torcher I'll bring you pain
I am heart ache and
I'll drive you insane

just lonely and looking for someone to care

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  • lonelyboy
    September 14
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    wow i envy ur rhyming skills great work