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your words make me go insane,
you will always be someone to blame,
we go back and forth as if time stands still,
bekering untill you seal the deal,
giving up right before i lift the pen,
im very awaer of the sin i almost gave in,

hearing your broken thoughts makes me gilty,
that i can walk away clean...you still filthy,
intense passion a wisper that speaks volumes,
so much so i need to find the sound room,
i know its not enough...i know it will never be,
for i know you secretly need me,
the sin piles up taking what i want,
leaving just the cup,
you know i wish that we will pass,
that i could have you without the tab,
a selfish request that i know you'll fufill,
for i've put a spell on you...we've already sealed the deal

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  • almostgrwn
    September 9, 2009
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    copy righted and writen by me

    i copy righted this...your thoughs please