Broken hearts,
Loving mums,
Bumped knee,
Bright blue sea.
Live life,
Love life,
always remember.....
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Supercalfragalisticexbialadoshis!
Author notes
We all loved Marry Poppins....didnt she teach us some of the best lessons.......
A contest entry
- 17 words by misticmoonlite.
800 points, ended September 12, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive criticism please and thank you
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ma bad honestly i went of this one,Loving mums,Live life kinda goes to ma prayer to god im asking why sorry if not what you wanted but awsome write here
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This is a beautiful poem...I find no errors here..The title could as well be' Life Synopsis' to spice up things more.
This poem bropught a smile on my face...Have a nice day and the best in the contest.
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Wonderful.
I just love the brevity power, humor of this peace. Bravo!
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what we have learned in our youth lets us appreciate our aging process as we learn to enjoyothers, thank you for joining in
Linda
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Nice and i love the last line, never going to forget it, may not always be able to spell it but a great write.
Great write and keep scribbling.
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