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Virginity

How old were you when you lost yours?
Were you both old enough not to break the law?

I remember my first time, 15 and ¾!
But this wasn’t the start of my slaughter

What if it happened when i was nine?
He went too far with a belly of wine

What do I do? This will drive me mad
I'm not really sure if my first was my dad

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  • Chuinky
    October 21
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    GREAT job! The last line is like WOW!!

  • inthemovies
    September 10

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    Oh god. ):

    This is wonderfully written, and terribly depressing. Which I guess just supports my saying that it's well written, lol.

    I can sort of relate to this, not because my father ever did anything to me, but because all the lines about who my first was are messed up too.

    The last line I especially like. Amazing job, keep it up