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I Want You Forever

I want to walk with you forever
arm in arm in crisp air
wandering amongst the lights
during a night at the county faire

I want to walk with you forever
over a lake’s dune
watching the distant sunset
listening to the cries of a loon

I want to walk with you forever
in an orchid of apple trees
picking the ripest fruits
hidden amongst the leaves

I want to walk with you forever
your hand held within mine
together for eternity
weathering the sands of time

I want to walk with you forever
my beautiful bride to be
I will stay with you forever
you mean everything to me.

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Written for my girlfriend Roxy, whom i love so much.

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  • lonelyboy
    September 13
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    i love this


  • Rocky Leigh
    September 9

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    beautiful

    i love u so much bran. this is a beautiful poem. and its perfect for us. xoxoxoox