Crispy on top,
and soft underneath,
I want a brownie,
but it's bad for my teeth.
I watch the knife slicing,
through chocolate and icing.
I'd add chocolate chips,
and maybe some sprinkles,
but they would go straight to my hips.
So maybe their not healthy
and they are bad for me,
but they're so delicious,
and you should agree.
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Very cute and so very true. Good job!!!
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This was good and funny! I enjoyed reading this. Brownies are awsome! I would have too say that this is my favorite part:
I want a brownie,
but it's bad for my teeth.
I watch the knife slicing,
through chocolate and icing.
I'd add chocolate chips,
and maybe some sprinkles,
but they would go straight to my hips.
But overall this was good! -
cute
i like this. it is a cute poem. very good lol
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