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When Water Children Return

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For John Beneke and Elandré Strydom:
their ships forever at anchor


O, ocean, that heaves wide and rushes
beauty and eternity,
hidden in your blue vault of secrets
unrest churns and silver rests in panned gold,
until deep sea waters -- numerically silenced by stick
and by staff --  will wash toward shores
driftwood and pearls, timeless, yet old:
dust and treasures sifted out to pure shimmers.

Saline waters will first turn fresh,
will then sing angels' sweet psalms:
joy's realization of hearsay;
finally, the riddle's
smooth, still mirror
will lay at our feet.



.
Wanneer  Waterkinders Wederkeer

Vir John Beneke en Elandré Strydom:
hul skepe vir ewig vasgemeer


O, oseaan, wat wyd stu en wat ruis
van skoonheid en van ewigheid,
verborge in jou blou geheime-kluis
kolk onrus en silwer rus in spoelgoud,
totdat die diepseewater -- numeries opgehef
deur stok en staf -- opdrifsels en pêrels, tydloos, maar oud,
landwaarts bring: uitskot, of skatte uitgesif
tot suiwer skittering.

Soutwater sal eers laf raak,
dan engelsoet psalm-sing:
vreugdevolle waarword van hoorsê;
uiteindelik sal die raaisel
se gladde, still spieël
voor ons voete lê.


Author notes

Prompt: 9. 9. 9

God Himself will decode all numbers in his time. Meanwhile, the rests of my nephew, John, and my cousin, Elandré, heave patiently in the wide ocean.

Painting: Nature's Vessel by Rina Badenhorst, SA artist.

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 23

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    the phrase: "...numerically silenced by stick...and by staff..." gives great depth to this reader. So many have tried to decipher the "riddle"...but, riddle it is, and most have been wrong.


  • Denerica silver member
    September 9

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    Beautiful when you put it bilingul too. Excellent. Blessings.


  • IronIcecream
    September 9

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    nein nein nein
    that's accounting business

    you live in a world where you have to pay if you have something to offer
    unless you're selling

    so unless you're wrongly sitting with your feet on the ground
    then you righteously hanging upside down from the ceiling
    and you're reading 666

  • siahaan
    September 9
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    huh..?


  • zhaniswolf
    September 9
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    I really like this piece. Fantastic use of words!


  • donnz
    September 9

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    Beuatifully Written

    "Blue vault of secrets / Mirror the riddle at his feet"


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 9

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    There is always such soothing serenity to be found upon your pages, Poet. Good luck in Carol's contest, Sweetie.


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