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Just Right for Me

and I close my eyes
found relief in a knife
happiness is too much for me
forget the hope
embrace the bleeding

all alone the way I feel
no sense now
for looking back
just close my eyes
and press down deeper

and I slowly realized
there's  a point to my life
no reason now for shallow breathing
drop the knife
but keep on screaming

and I close my eyes
found relief in my life
happiness in just right for me
forget the pain
and stop the bleeding

Author notes

some lines (alot of them) are taken from the song "the way she feels" by Between the Trees and the last time is from To Write Love on Her Arms. Rescue is Possible.

I plan to revise, what do you think?

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