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Character

Wisdom is not awarded.
it is earned
by the acquisition
of virtue.

Compassion is not an prize
to  be accepted
on the world stage,
it is achieved by perseverance
of the human element

forgiveness ...

Tolerance can not be inherited,
passed on by the element
of righteousness ,
it must be a goal achieved
by accommodation

to all...

Mercy comes from within,
a benefit granted only
to those who have acquired benevolence
for their clemency towards those
who seek acceptance

yet...

lack the courage to apply for the same...

Trust is a gift of the angels
bestowed to only those
who comprehend the meaning
of its attainment,
value

consequence...

Courage is an achievement
acquired by circumstance alone,
reaching out for what
may not be visible
or attainable,
but determined to conqure it

at all cost...

Love is to believe in yourself,
in your goodness and humility

only then...

can you love another,
as yourself,
in the manner

The Lord intended...


His own...














Author notes

I am not this person, yet it is my goal to achieve this status..I have a way to go, but it is a point of destiny for myself.....a goal.

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  • Demon Vampire 2
    October 16
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    very nice inspiration on this one. great write

  • Synchronicity gold member
    October 13

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    Flowing inspiration

    These words were well placed upon the waterfall background, for they flow like drops of inspiration from above. To live by this poem would be to find a life of deep fulfillment. This is an inspiring goal for yourself and for all who read.


  • Thewordflow
    October 12

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    Some beautiful words from the heart here

    Good luck and thankyou

  • Wisdom 1
    October 10
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    my name

    love it because it starts with my name. love the way you stressed other virtues.


  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 7

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    This was a very truthful poem. I like the way you wrote it. We have to work to attain these goals to be the person we want to be. I agree whole heartedly with you on this. Great write. A nice goal to try to reach.
    Steve.


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    September 29

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    Beautiful

    Wonderful words of truth and wisdom; no doubt born from a life lived in search of the same. This poem flowed effortlessly, and delivered deep, yet simple life-lessons. (Its seldom as complicated as we make it, is it?) Beautiful work, Poet. A joy to read.


  • smitaanand
    September 24

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    You have spoken straight from the heart bringing some home truths to the threshold of recognition and making us engrossd in the quest for more realise and acknowledge the real treasures of living existence.Please keep sharing your lovely verse with us all.God bless, take care...


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 19

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    I am so glad to see your poem on the front page,
    This is what poetry is
    comes straight from the soul,
    and pulls out truth
    beautifully written
    your AN , HUMILITY you are certainly on the right path
    God bless you my friend...


    • John BoSox
      September 19
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      Thank you..so kind you are,,.I appreciate youe comments

      John


  • taylorndncar gold member
    September 18

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    "by acquisition of virtue", i take it you mean, common sense; however, wisdom is the virtue of common sense;
    courage is not an achievement; it is performing that which is necessary, in spite of circumstance,...quibbles, mere quibbles. i would not change a thing in your beautiful effort. it is excellent as it stands...!

  • taylorndncar gold member
    September 17
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    a very good piece of effort; well-thought out and written! a couple of things i can disagree with, but this effort is a serious write and my disagreement seems petty...! a good job!


  • Ellegirl silver member
    September 17
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    I have no doubt you are this person because you have a path and a goal!
    Wonderful poem!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    September 17
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    great write and good goals to attain in life


  • sonia 77
    September 17
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    Very nice , my dear !!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 17

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    Very wise and self reflective write. I agree with the sentiments expressed. It reminds me somewhat of the quote by Sen Dan Coats that in part states:
    "Character cannot be summoned at the moment of crisis if it has been squandered by years of compromise and rationalization. The only testing ground for the heroic is the mundane"

    Great write


  • Supergirl2010
    September 17
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    You did a great job on this piece!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 16

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    O Wise One... may the inner you continue to shine through to the outer you... Thank you for sharing such a noble masterpiece... Good work, Poet!!
    Peace,
    Cyn

  • Bells-Kelly
    September 16
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    true and wonderfully written. excellent work


  • glenn shannon silver member
    September 16
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    very true and brilliantly done congrats on spottie well deserved


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 16

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    This is a very thoughtful, introspective piece, Poet. Indeed, I discovered a long time ago that true wisdom only arrives on our doorsteps when we submerge our egos, realizing that we may never learn all of the lessons there are to know in a single lifetime. Well penned and worthy of more in-depth perusals within ourselves. I'm pleased this piece was spotlighted. It deserves it.


  • Mr.
    September 16

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    This was very beautiful and full of wisdom. Thanks for sharing it.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    September 16

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    Beautiful poem filled with wise nutrition to increase the size and heart
    of a man and womans soul!

    A goal we all aspire to embrace!
    and what a magnificent journey it is...

    if ever you want to recognize me on this journey?
    I'm the one...with scuffed knees learning the cement lessons
    of humility.....oh...the landings can be brutal!

    giggle.
    ears/Seattle

    WAY TO WRITE!


    • John BoSox
      September 16
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      I always appreciate your thoughtfull comments..Thank you

      John


  • Thewordflow
    September 16
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    Amazing, for a moment there i forgot where i was

    congratulations on the spotlight position aswell


  • whitecoffee
    September 16
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    You Rock! many congrats on the spotlight!!

  • mama-drama
    September 16
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    Beautiful...I was carried away.There's a nice gentle flow to it.Good work


  • poetryality silver member
    September 15

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    John,



    I take issue with your author notes. The man I have come to know, through your writings and comments, knows all of what is written here... How could you know these things without experiencing them in some way? I realize that an element of humility and modesty is a requirement of life but I feel you are well on your way in accomplishing these virtues. I see a man who is wise and kind. Those attributes are indeed that which you write with and share with every reader. I loved this poem and the fact that it is written by a man of your excellent "character".


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee

  • Lilac Moon silver member
    September 13

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    You might want to correct the following errors:

    Compassion is not "an" prize -- it is "a" prize.

    "conqure" should be conquer.

    Also -- I would have chosen to punctuate this piece differently. For this reader, thus piece was awkward due to that -- however, it has obviously caused me to pause and think

    Lilac Moon


  • awannabepoet
    September 11

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    It is a noble thing to reach for such perfect balance between all things good and bad in this world, there can never be only good nor can there be only evil so we must learn to live and accept ourselves and always look to be something better than we were the day before.

    What a great poem to share John, thank you so much for a wonderful read.

    awannabepoet


  • The kiss is Thirst gold member
    September 10
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    Good stuff here. Lots of inspiration and aims to climb to. Keep chipping away!


  • just2write silver member
    September 10

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    Words to live by...

    You poem is full with inspiration and truths. It explores the goals of good people everywhere. It is a gentle poem that prods us into thinking about what kind of person we are, and who we will become. If only we could achieve wisdom through virtue, compassion from forgiveness, mercy with acceptance, trust of values, couraage regarless of circumstance - but the greatest goal - Love through yourself, to yourself and to all others. This poem is much like a prayer. Certainly one who is struggling to understand their purpose in life might read it that way.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    September 10

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    Poetry is there to share wisdom and that was exactly what you have done. Applause to you for such a well crafted piece and I must say that I quite enjoyed this! This poem can open the door to so many discussions and true life stories that I can think off. You left me in awe!

    Take care
    Becks


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    September 10
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    this is very thought provoking, i enjoyed the read, take care


  • MrH997
    September 10

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    I agree with this to love other you have to love yourself first not with arrogance but with humility , You have written a nice poem with your soft and wise words.

    Great Job and God Bless.

  • Nafrititi
    September 10

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    Excellant!

    I 100% agree with your words,
    very moving and flowing...
    Thanks for yr hope and trust.

    The background si also veyr touching. and sobering as per the topic itself...
    kp it up...
    rgds


  • An Old Codger gold member
    September 9

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    Wisdom flows from your quill here my friend. This journey is forever traveled by those who seek inner peace and the character to share it.


  • Sable May
    September 9

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    Very Nice John! Its has such a soft feel to it. Warm and inviting, very thought out with the heart more than mind. Great job!

  • Bob Fox
    September 9

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    John

    Wise words indeed. The sad part is how many heed them? in todays world the number may be down. As for love I believe that to be able to love another you must first be kinder and gentler to yourself. Always a fine read.


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    September 9

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    AMAZING!!!

    WOW! This is absolutely AMAZING! I am LOVING this entire piece. You have tapped into an awareness that is completely mind-boggling! The whole concept of this write is one that I can totally buy into. I feel silly carrying on and on about it but You have to know that this is exactly the kind of writing that appeals to me! I like that your author's notes say that this is the person you wish to be. The fact that you are so aware of the dynamics that it takes to acheive this goal makes it an absolute...Thank you John for sharing your vision. Good luck in all that you do...you are closer than you believe...

    Peace & Light,
    Kendal


    • John BoSox
      September 9
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      Thank you, Kendall..I appreciate your comments.so much

      John


  • StarEyes
    September 9

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    John,

    What a beautiful read this one is! I love it!

    You really did a great job on this one!!!


    I think we all have a long ways to go to become the person you
    speak of in this one! Great job!

    and love

    Nyetta



    • John BoSox
      September 9
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      Thank you, kiddo..so kind of you..I appreciate your words

      John

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