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Acceptance Embrace

Crystallized colors embrace the ordinary
intensifying a bland appearance,
constituting a spectacular collage,tagged natures' beauty.
Red's bleed life into inanimate objects
projecting exquisiteness; embracing listless souls.
Rejuvenating a calmness that pulsates through cold veins
warming hearts.

 

Cool breezes graze a face of loneliness,

instantly releasing receptive responses.

Smiles radiate light breaking through

shrouds of greyness, embracing the needy.

Feelings of acceptance permeate nostrils,

seeking recipient's in need of affirmation,

acknowledging those forgotten.

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Abstract by Dougall
I incorrporated my admiration for fall & homeless people or lonely people in need of love and acknowledgment.

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  • LylaEmoriaCullen
    October 30
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    This poem is a little sad and a little peaceful, I loved it


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 22

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    A thought provoking piece you have penned
    with the strength of colours, that highlight a message that stands out
    Thank you and best wishes to you

    Julie


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 21

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    I agree with Erwin, this is a lovely blending of colours and the senses... and it holds a feeling of serenity within it. I think there are so many that are forgotten and need that affirmation. Wonderful write.

    Jacks


  • Nevel
    September 15

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    Such a blend of colours and senses, wonderful done. subtle but strong imagery here...the poem feels like a nessecary return, for rejuvenation. It's a great poem, I really like it. Your diction is complicated as ever lol. It read as a fresh breeze, the voice of Autumn, acting as a healer. Good luck to you
    Erwin

  • I am sure it will be wonderful dear sis I love the Bg!!!!!! I love you!!!

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