Vagueness in the mist of lost affection
Moments to kill only to dream again
On unfamiliar grounds to be ripe in allure
Feelings to conquer than rise and fall
Cherish her as that goddess she desires
But love her as the woman she deserves
Waiting calmly for love to take her innocence
Broken but stronger in her right
To be that female of false light
In the illusion behind every smokescreen
She can lift the chains of failed bondage
And be that resurrection of mans origins
Formed to melt the most wicked of minds
Troublesome in youth but affectionate
Like an aged wine in bodied perfume
Iike golden lavender her sexuality untouched but tainted
Eyes to fool but a heart to befriend all
Love to be and never to be that failed attraction
Author notes
Be inspired by this image by Richard Price
A contest entry
- Art by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
1000 points, ended September 11, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was absolutely gorgeous and REAL.
You opened many emotions here,
and expressed them in ways I can
not even express the beauty/depth of.
Congrats on a very well deserved gold hun
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Thanks babe your picture inspired me
kisses XX
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I love the concept of thoughts you have etched here
Bringing her innerself to the surface and to appreciate her womenhood
and her sensuality.
A touching write beautifully penned
Thank you and best wishes
Julie
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Oh my...my first read of yours, and cannot say anything but awe struck with how you have taken the prompt..Your insight and portrayal of her is nothing short of brilliant, creative and most compassionate...Wishing you well in the contest!
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I can almost
picture her without the picture. This is a good write poet.
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well worded. A terrific write. best of luck in the contest
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