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Ruby

i am young,
i envy the old,
i am young,
i envy the old,
i'm aging but i'm still young
i'm aging but i'm still young

i am old,
i envy the young,
yes i'm old,
now i envy the young
now i'm old,
i'm almost done,

i sit alone singing cabaret,
Dreaming of my glory days,
trying to forget my glory days
a smoky room a sweet young thing
a jewel in a sea of shit
a jewel in a sea of shit

 

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  • tidoubleguher
    October 30

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    The ironic thing that I laugh at is when I was 14 and in my teen years, my parents said "you have no idea what love is!" And as I grew and they got older, they fill my ears with stories of "don't you remember when we were young and in love?" Makes me smile. Great job!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 24

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    This is quite interesting; I do confess being a little unsure how it fits into the contest but I quite like it so therefore have no drama with it staying in -
    perhaps you could enlighten me though

    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda