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Summah' Blow Out

Beach sand in my ears
cracks in my feet
summah' decks
summah' piers
summah' body surfing.

Cheers lets all grab
a beer.

Let's go.......

Fumes in the tent
basket ball thumps
and thumps
kids awake, yeah!

Gottah' headache

Camp fire delights
colors in flame
marsh mellow mess
sticks.

Farris wheel tight knuckled
rides, no airborn surprise
everyone ate well.

Little one learns the balance
of bike, legs of hiking jello.

Hands held in the park
pee'd behind the tarp
after dark warm snuggles
warding off the chill
of night...

Summah's end

With my best friend, lover C



Author notes

Had a great time at Old Orchard Beach with my girl.
She thought she'd caught me checking out a bikini walking down the beach. I was watching a boat way out wondering to myself about the fishing. Sheesh! I must be getting old to have missed that bikini.

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  • CandiKisses
    October 11
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    So Sweet Baby!

    I had a great time, too. And the bikini...well hell ya, you must be getting old!!


  • csmmoms2
    September 9
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    Lol at the author notes!
    I never thought that the endless summer would ever end...that's what we're supposed to think.
    -c

    • dillpickle62
      September 11
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      Summah's

      Not quite over for me just yet. I have my book signing this weekend and a big celebration party afterward. Only then will I go into my Fall season.
      Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed.


  • albymyheart gold member
    September 9

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    Ahhhhhhh....so good. This was like looking at snapshots of a summer holiday ('though I would hope there wouldn't be a snap of you peeing behind a tarp). I love the intricate detail you put into with this...I could picture it all so clearly. A pleasure to read...Alby


  • Rheea gold member
    September 9
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    Love has got you this time darling brother. I love to hear the happiness in your poems when we see them now a days.

    • dillpickle62
      September 11
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      Thank-you :)

      I'm glad you check in on me. I've been away so much from my computor these days. Life is happy and too quick for me as of lately. On the go very much.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 9

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    aaww...

    An excellent write, with that immitable wit i loved from the first time i read you still intact too! loved that, love this.. great one big guy..

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