Golden threads in the air do glisten,
while amber flecks in the sun do dance.
Breath is held as your lips you moisten,
your head is tilted in happy stance.
Dreams you dreamed are a vision alive,
absorbed in colours that grace the sky.
Beauty falls from a star struck heaven,
as we dance together, flying high.
Hush, feel my spirit as we come down
merge with you as heaven's music plays
a symphony, as to earth we go,
its melody within forever stays.
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Wow. The up and down of this poem is like a sigh of ecstacy. Such a pretty love poem. Your poems always put me in a good lovey dovey mood. ;D And the way you describe things is always so magical!
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Outstanding
This is such a musical poem - it made me think of angels and harmony almost heavenly love. The imagery is strong throughout and adds to the effect of the poem. Thank you for posting.
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Oh Kiran, this is amazing! Every word and feeling a delight. You are a true romanticist!
Love this!
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really pretty.
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Oh, this is lovely and most lulling! In reading this poem I was struck by the fact that some of it reminded me of one of my favorite poets, obsucre though he may be, Robert E. Howard. I loved the poem!
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such a serene sound here as i read and was enveloped in the feelings of love, pur and simple
onest good words
white
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Welcome back Kiran too long have you been missing.As ever you make writing love poems seem so very easy .Could it be the fact that love plays a part? I know it does every word speaks it
Excellent a joy to have you posting again
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a good poem, and good to see something new posted by your pen
ah sweet love, and lips full of moisture. like a wild bloom in smiling sunlight. let the dance forever move along the sky's wide beauty as the spirit wraps heaven's wonder in the heart. 
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