Dusk has faded to a silent night.
Where shadows dance behind hints of light.
Entwined together the bodies sway.
Silence is broken when you hear one of them say,
Hurry before the kids wake up!
A contest entry
- only 5 lines. by emma....
865 points, ended September 22, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You have me chuckling, I've read it three times with the same response, been there...'nuf said.
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i clicked on dis title beecause it reminded me of a song by Rasmus,grea8 song.
but wen i came to see dis poem and done redin it. i was like "wow" at the hole time. dude u did a lovely job wit dis one.
i don think Shakesphere can rite dis kind of beautiful poem lik u.
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Hehe. This is very good. IT has a hint of humor to it. Great job and thanks for sharing.
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