There was a young lady called Emma
Who found herself in a dillema
She was pregnant you know
And wow did it show
Her beau skipped town on Bramah
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Gold Please
A contest entry
- only 5 lines. by emma....
865 points, ended September 22, 67 entries
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I am a bit puzzled by this. Mainly because [1] dilemma is spelled thus; [2] Bramah doesn't rhyme. Also I noted in yr autobiog that you say, "I believe in God - (the creator of all things seen and unseen) I believe the Theory of Evolution is a scientific impossibiliy (well I know it is)" and that is W.E.I.R.D. but I don't hold it against you!
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Me Thinks
We both may be a little weird - lol - at least in each others eyes - have a great day - you ought to grow a beard Edna - anything would be an improvement - ehhh -
Ok Ok - dill-emma then -
Bramha - ryhmes with Emma as far Allpoetry goes - but maybe they gave me a bum steer - lol - oh well - how you doing - long time no see - lol - not weird at all - as long as it's only a theory I refuse to believe it - a missing link would help too - thank you for not holding "it" against me - ditto - but a lot of people do hold it against me and for the life of me I can't understand why - and it ain't nobodies but my own - Cheers - Joe - dobar dan ---------------------------------------- peace
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I loved how you started it off. Emma with a dilimma. Poor Emma.
hehe. ☺☻
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Not Funny Hunny
Poor Emma - there are many Emmas out there - and guys that skip town - really a sad tale - thanks for the compliment and applause - Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ be of good cheer
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Nice job. Limericks are some of my favorites. This is cute. I got a chuckle out of it.
Mike
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I like them too -
I got a medly of limericks on my site - "A Medly Of Limericks" I have one on it's own "Jake" - my personal favorite. thanks for the applause and compliments - be of good cheer - Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------------- peace
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;-) how many emmas in this world !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Lol
A way to many I think Sona - but thats life ehhh? - sad for Emma to be abandoned - the guy needs 30 lashes with a cat o' nine tails - lol - thanks for the applause - Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------------------ hugs
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LOL!
I see you also wrote a limerick for the contest! The "five lines" kinda inspired that, even for me, and I hardly ever rhyme. Mind you, even though I ended up following a limerick-style rhyme pattern, it's not a true limerick in that it's not a comedic poem. Oh well.
Best wishes on that gold...!
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I have "a medley of limericks" posted on here
There was a young girl named Alanna
She hailed from the land of Can-ada
She said for what it is worth
It's the best country on Earth
Yankees call it the Republic of Banana
well - not to bad for of the cuff - lol - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan
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James Aguilar
I forgot to input the appluse.
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Thanks James
Thanks for the applause - I like your pic of the American Eagle - America's symbol of peace - we'll make war till we find peace - lol - a Dove would would suffice - Joe -------------------------------------------- make peace not war
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James Aguilar
Nice write.
Joe I like your style of writing.
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Thank You
For for the compliment -
Get out there James - defeat the enemy - it's all their fault - lol ---------------- Joe
12X12
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Hahaha!! And rightfully you demand for Gold.
Love
`Noor
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Haa Haa - Platinum Would Be Better
Thanks for the clappies - have you put me down as your AP Stalker yet - lol - I am alreadt Princess Rickie AP Stalker - but she just may fire me - lol - I haven't been doing my job very well - lol - Love, Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------------------------ -------------------------------------------------------------- peace -
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Hahaha!! Yupe, I am putting you as my AP stalker once I do the page and arrange my AP family which should be soon.
I won't fire you but you got to be good for the job.
Love
~Noor
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Hahahaha....funny ...GOLD for Joe pleeeeease!!!
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Hi Lulu
I hardly ever win in a contest - but who knows ehhh - Gold would suffice - lol - hows you new car? does it feel like it's hugging you - after all it is French - lol - Hugs - Joe - dobar dan ---------------------------------------------------------- peace
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