The gentle safety of the land
Was taken from under me
I stepped upon a place
I've never been before
It was never as bad as this
It never looked so guilty
The land was taken away
To pollution and disgust.
A contest entry
- Prewrites Only -- With a Twist! by Heroesrox.
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Short, to the point and powerful. Very good! Thanks for entering my contest!
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great job i am all enviromentel and this ppoem just made me smile its nice to no others care thank you for entering this in my contest and i wish you the bestest of luck in it too. ~jasmine~
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Awesome...
Beautifully done...
So much so wonderfully expressed in so few words & poignent in its complex simplicity of a theme that effects us all...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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how green, i agree but it is not the person it is the government, money matters nothing else. fat cats and wealthy notes.
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Wonderful! Do not plan on revising this poem cause this is great! I absolutely love the theme of the poem.... or what I gather as the theme... And what you've done with it! Absolutely original!
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