With this ring comes my promise to you
always my love for you will be true
nobody has ever touched my heart
the way you have from the very start
i am sure these words must seem cliche
but there is no other for me to say
My heart is yours for now and ever
my love for you will last forever
never will i need another
for as long as we have each other
Still these words do not seem enough
to put such feelings into words is tough
while your at school its you that i miss
i close my eyes and remember your kiss
no matter how crappy i am feeling
those memories always send me reeling
you can make me feel better from miles away
i look forward to hearing your voice everday
even now i cant help but smile as i think of you
and look forward to a future where we both say i do
never will you have to be all alone
with this promise i hope my love will be shown
that i am yours for now and ever
and my love for you will last forever.
Author notes
so this probably not very good but ive been very out of practice and im starting to write some more now
Let me know what you think please
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YAY
I do know how lucky I am
and I love the poem
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I'm lucky to have you my amazing girl! :)
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Awww. Lil bro that was so beautiful. You have done a stunning job on the love in this. I hope she realizes how truly lucky she is to have you. Nice to read something new from you, too.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Thanks
I am so lucky to have her and my heart is hers forever, words cant describe how i feel but i can try to put some form to these feelings
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