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A secret language

She wrote our secret history upon those
Battered walls, violet visions of our thoughts
But now they bleed scarlet rivers perhaps
A secret language among those who are
Meant to part.

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 8

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    These are five lines that are destined to hold in the mind of a reader--in other words, unforgettable. You made the words you used resound with significance. Good luck with the contest