Dearest Love,
Pull me close against the warmth of your body
Wrap your arms around me tight, never let me go
Tell me you love me, that everything will be ok, that you will never leave me
Press your lips against mine, kiss me passionately
I want to feel your heart beat against mine, beating as one
For so long I've waited for my Prince, but now, my wait is over
You have walked out of my dreams and made me your Queen
I shall never leave you nor forsake you, for you are my Love
Not even Death itself can ever seperate me from loving you
Its you and I forever
A contest entry
- Prewrites :) Yes, as many as you like, but hell this wont be simple. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended November 3, 1103 entries
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I love your poem about love! It's beatiful!
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Lots of love written out on the page here. It seems like a love letter ... or that's the way I see it. Thank you for entering the contest.
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I like this alot
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aww
this is so amazing!
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This is sooo good! I think it's one of your best poems. You should be proud.
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Wooooow
Excelente!! What a fantastic description you have here. I just love honest, truthful, and elegant this feels. =)
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Absolutely BEAUTIFUL piece. You and I have so much in common. I feel the same way about my true love. Words are just indescribeable. and I know you mean everything you are saying, but do you ever feel like your significant other is just too good for words? Like nothing you say seems right because He's so much better than that? I love writing poetry about him too, but I feel like I'm inderstating my feelings for him. Because He's so important to me and I love him so much. I loves lines 1-5. They really point out how much you enjoy being near this person. and not just in person, but emotionally connecting with this person. I loved your poem. Keep up the good work. People have a lot to learn from you!
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