As the moon revealed itself from the clouds
My shadow stretched further behind me
The entire beach lit up, like a christmas tree
As if it was preparing itself for a finale
I sat down on the blue-sand beach
Admiring the scenery before me
When suddenly, i saw her
There was she.
A dream of the gods, she was
Her beauty untamed, it seemed
She was a gift from the heavens
Wrapped in the dark veil of the sea
Her green eyes stared right through me
And i lost myself in them
Her golden hair rode the waves behind her
Less like a creature, more like an angel, she was then.
The clouds moved in
The blue light slowly dimmed
My shadow, dwarfed
And she.....she was gone
What did i see
What did i feel
Was it fantasy, reality
or.....somewhere in between??
Author notes
Well....i got inspired by divine cascade's poem ( the blue moon one ) so thnx for inspiring me red......as for the picture...its picture 2
P.S: i changed the scenery from day to night....thought it wud be more romantic that way
A contest entry
- MYSTICAL MERMAIDS & FANTASY by ennovy.
700 points, ended September 20, 15 entries
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Sometimes it is hard to believe our eyes, but it's the perception that counts anyway. Thank you for entering our contest, and good luck to you.
Novy & Brazos
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this is a very vivid write ...I see a person in awe of the beautiful sea creature
that leaves just as fast as she appeared....let me know if you revise this poem
I want to read it again.....thank you for entering novy & Brazos
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