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careful

the best place
is that time
between sleep and awake,
where dreams
can be consciously chosen,
and there are
no worries.

and the beauty of it
is that it's not real,
so you can't lose
anything,
but you can win it all.

perhaps that's what
makes reality hurt,
because generally,
what is lost,
cannot neither be
found
nor saved.

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    September 9

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    A very thought provoking piece!!!!   It makes one stop and think about what thoughts you had while dreaming time. My problem is I usually can not remember what I dreamed about.
    However, I usually do know the things I lose in my life time. Very creative and interesting. Thank you for sharing with us.