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Gates of Sleep III: The Gate of Horn

Through Iv'ry I send fictions—False
Lovely lies not easily lost
But, through Horn, Truth is demanded
And feeble candor is remanded

But if Truth tinges every fable
I suppose I am surely able
To mask real Truth with little lies
That burn and gutter and synchronize

The Shade Gods watching: I send lonely leaves
Through yellowed, broken, hallowed eaves
Abominable Gate, you must accept
These ethereal lives and diaphanous deaths

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The third and last of the Gates of Sleep series. Each poem should be reminiscent in form and structure, with little tweaks to differentiate them.

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  • Denerica silver member
    September 8
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    Wow, what images, the feeling lashes out...well done. Blessings.