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Something told me to run,
and so I did.
I'm not sure of who I am without you,
so I took my heart, and ran.
I know I couldn't stand  to see another hand upon you,
you meant more to me than anyone I loved at all.
Will she love you more than I could?
She dares to stand within my footsteps.
Starving for you here,
with my undying love.
So I must breathe for yesterday is gone,
hopefully I can live again tomorrow.
Rejected compassion,
vanquished trust.

Nothing but an empty relationship.

One day I will have the courage to move away,

all mind, body and soul.

Today I'm still contained in your mental shackles for me.

The key wrapped around my neck,

at least if I stay...you're always around.

What do you all think? Been a while since I wrote anything.

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