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An Icy Cold Volcano.

The fire beneath us erupts,
wanting to be lips and lust.
Roses aren't just a simple gift,
People move and drift,
This is me saying,
We're going down fighting.

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  • Jaded Juliet
    September 12

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    This is really good. I bet if you added to it, it could be really epic. I love it dude. Kudos for real. It's very clever. I'm sure you could add more too. You are like poetic genius. Haha. Keep it coming.


  • Serene Rose
    September 8

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    i love the last two lines. and i like this, though it seems like its a bunch of ideas and thoughts jammed together; its not just one thought process.