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Divine Retribution


Cursed is my nature,
Lost in a sea of confusion,
Hanging from a rope wrapped in hatred,
Left alone in a room of perpetual darkness,
Torn between going left or right,
Not knowing which is the safest path,
No clear future in sight,
Nothing but an empty shell,
Closed openly to the world,
Thanks to those nearby,
And that to those who never helped.

Chorus
Hopeless Nature,
Empty Soul,
Forgotten People,
Naked Minds,
Divine Retribution Tonight.

There he stood,
Before falling to the floor,
She was lost in in a blank mind,
With only a sheet to cover her shame,
Tainted with blood from her act,
the justice served by the only means necessary,
Death was the final outcome.

Chorus

He never expected this,
From the one he held,
She had been broken down,
Beaten and abused,
Forced in a corner,
Torn between her life or his death,
She did what was right for her,
He was meant to die

Chorus (followed by a short instrumental break)

She was charged with his murder,
And was never seen again,
Didn't matter what had been done to her,
Or been said by all the experts,
She had killed a man,
And was left to die,
Divine Retribution served.

Chorus (repeat and slowly fade away)

Author notes

I know this is actually a song I wrote, but it originally started off as a short poem, so I felt like I should share it with the Allpoetry community.

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  • Denerica
    September 8
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    Wow, a deep, emotional song...life gives us alot. Excellent write. Blessings.