I need to let loose,
All the demons in my head,
All this shit,
It needs to come out,
Pent up rage,
The urge to kill,
All this shit,
In my life,
I just want to,
Fuck it all,
Just make it over,
Make it dead,
Just let me go,
To another place,
Inside of my head
Let me murder my sanity,
Show me another world,
where I can let loose,
take all this shit away,
Make it gone,
This shit is my life,
Make it stop,
I can't take it,
It feels like fire,
the demons in my head,
Take away this life,
Make it hollow,
Make it Painless,
Just Take It Away
Please tell me what you think
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Wow this one really hit home for me. It kind of describes how i've been feeling lately in ways I don't think I could. Good job.
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Short, choppy, but real. Sometimes I say "fuck it" and just let the pen hit the paper (actually the fingers hit the keyboard) without thought of making something remarkable. Gotta just let it out sometimes. Good job man.
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need to channel this into lyric form
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Okay...
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This was written a few weeks after my girlfriend left me. I just needed to get the shit out. Don't expect this to be an amazing piece, I put emotion into it. Theres just something in it that I don't lack. It lacks something, I just don't know what.
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