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fall from the sky  silly and dizzy child of humanity  wings left to pandora's mistake, smile  flatly like small talk suffocation  crash  and eat cement the side walk blues whispering sad little whimpers, of a child's chalky hands bleeding dust of abandonment giggles  of shattering hopes, silly kid little tricks are forever.  flutter flutter little 'anchor that could', and with buck teeth  and with the accent of the dead it smells a little too funny a little to like a hot iron on cold weak flesh and punched out eyes.  you can fly.  you can fly falling. why so negitive crow? did you loose to the raven?  you smirk and caw then take off  bleach white by  your fight to flight. child of humanity  oh lost of your wings to pandora's sins  now cleanse your plate of demons  that have filled it for you to eat and be eaten by cleanse your plate and remember its just  a light bulb painted  in the colors your hate  sweet bitter  illusions.... fall from the sky and know what clouds say and see and you will be among them

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  • Kathraina silver member
    September 17

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    Very good job with this piece, I love the interesting imagery you've created here.
    Great metaphors and really good flow throughout!

    Bravo and thank you for sharing



    ♥ Kate


  • omanixax
    September 9
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    i love this