fall from the sky silly and dizzy child of humanity wings left to pandora's mistake, smile flatly like small talk suffocation crash and eat cement the side walk blues whispering sad little whimpers, of a child's chalky hands bleeding dust of abandonment giggles of shattering hopes, silly kid little tricks are forever. flutter flutter little 'anchor that could', and with buck teeth and with the accent of the dead it smells a little too funny a little to like a hot iron on cold weak flesh and punched out eyes. you can fly. you can fly falling. why so negitive crow? did you loose to the raven? you smirk and caw then take off bleach white by your fight to flight. child of humanity oh lost of your wings to pandora's sins now cleanse your plate of demons that have filled it for you to eat and be eaten by cleanse your plate and remember its just a light bulb painted in the colors your hate sweet bitter illusions.... fall from the sky and know what clouds say and see and you will be among them
Author notes
not sure what to name this?
A contest entry
- rant to me quickie by Kathraina.
400 points, ended September 17, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
suggestions? criticism, thoughts, likes dislikes..
Comments
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Very good job with this piece, I love the interesting imagery you've created here.
Great metaphors and really good flow throughout!
Bravo and thank you for sharing
♥ Kate -
i love this


