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I ask myself the same things
over and over again,
Why me?
Why am I still here?
Where did I go wrong?
Why do you hate me so much?
So what if I said bad things,
so what if I was a pain in the ass,
you hurt me,
you always did,
you ended up almost destroying me,
now your brother destroys whats left...
Injecting my mind with painful words,
horrible thoughts and feelings,
bruising my body until it's black and blue,
your violence worse every time I see you...
I want to die,
I always have and will...
No one can stop me anymore...

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  • serenity silvermoon
    October 22

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    now sissy we talked about this you will not kill yourself you will go and get help like now tell a teacher tell the cops go to the hospital this is a great poem but very sad you help him hurt you everyday you dont tell someone you can even go to the hospital and tell them about how you cut yourself and tell them you need help and when you talk to the people tell them about your uncle just do something you need help i hate seeing you like this thank you for sharing keep up the great work


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 15

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    Honey lets think about what you have said here

    You say so what if you said bad things to another yet you say they hurt you .Two wrongs dont ever make a right never has never will . And what you let others do to you is you letting them honey . Scream out tell the law tell the neighbors for their are people who will help you but you keep pushing everyone away .Mama tonight is asking you why . Why honey for even though you dont see it why can we see what is ahead for you .Let your dreams of the life you want take the lead . Then you will see that to keep yourself in this frame of mind you keep the bars up around you refusing to move forward and find the happiness reaching out to you . Embrace those who makes you feel loved and you will enter into a time without tears or fear.


  • Not-The-Sun
    September 12

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    such a sad write
    you did a wonderful job of expressing yourself here.
    if you are looking for revisions, I would recommend considering changing some of the end line punctuation; sometimes there are better alternatives to commas, such as periods, no punctuation at all, or semicolons : )
    bet you ; can't guess ; which is ; my favorite ; punctuation to use ; )


  • darlee77 gold member
    September 12

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    This is breaking my heart. I would love to be able to hold you and make everything ok. I can't but God can. Don't give up. Seek help outside the home.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    September 12

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    oh, hon. I have told you over and over again... you don't have to put up with it!
    talk to a school counselor, go to the police. Surely, anthing else is better than what you describe here. It isn't your fault dear one... never was, and never will be. you were born into these circumstances -that is out of your control. but you can take control NOW and do something about it to change your life, and his; for the better. love you... message me anytime. karen


  • She burns
    September 11
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  • Puppydog gold member
    September 9

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    SO MUCH ANGUISH!!!

    So much you had gone through my dear 's So many who love you and want to help but cannot go there to help. I am always here sweetie, please stay in there for we your AP family do love you. 's


  • StarEyes
    September 8

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    Babygirl,

    You did a great job on this one, but again, the subject matter..... I know how you feel, I just wish I could help you more.

    You know where I am...

    I love you Babygirl

    and love

    Nyetta

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