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life is full of changes

all these sunny days
over top of the waves,

but just think
tomorow will be a even better day,

yesterday brought us here
and tomorow will bring us somewhere else,

but no matter what comes our way
we will always have each other,

we have both made mistakes
but we tryed our hardest to fix them,

now it is time to leave them behind
and move on with life,

each day we live is a gift
so use it wisely,

life is full of changes
so make yours for the better,

live life to its fullest
if you don't who will.

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  • Brlsbb
    September 11
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    Very intersting.. humm..