bloodlust in shadows of torment
capturing the essence of your soul
in this world I no longer exist.
© September 8, 2009
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A contest entry
- easy way to impress me and win points =]] by Kathraina.
575 points, ended September 20, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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in this world I no longer exist.. great last line there !!! I like the imagery of your lust in blood and torment and capturing ones soul... welldone. Great short write which is powerful!! x
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thank you. sometimes I do feel as such. I think we all do at some points in our lives.
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Very powerful words you've written here.
Haunting imagery I receive from this write.
Really intriguing read
Bravo and thank you for entering
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thank you, hun.
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