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honey



 

coffee flavored honey

is ridiculous. and our clever cleavers

clash together like

our obnoxious "yeaaaaaah"s

while your rare yet rich

"fuck me"s ring in my

ears. we're a terribly 

organized mixtape

that begins with the

most intense rhythm and

ends when it 

should begin, with a gentle song

like my soft kisses during

hard fucking. but we

keep it on repeat

because the lyrics have

a lesson to teach.

 


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  • chasing rainbows
    October 13
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    you are fantastically strange <3


  • alexluvsglitter
    September 16
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    A very unique write. Fascinating imagery. The last lines had subtle power.

    ♥
    A. R. Rodriguez


  • insidemjsnotebook
    September 14

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    This was very interesting. I like it. The way you structured it is pretty awesome also.

    Fav Line: like my soft kisses during
    hard fucking.


  • bluebird.
    September 9

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    "coffee flavored honey"
    ~ coffee flavoured anything is delicious.

    "clever cleavers
    clash"
    ~ alliteration FTW.

    "mixtape"
    ~ reminds me of a Brand New song. Ergo, this word rocks.

    Liked the closing bit, as well.


    • nicki1
      September 10
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      I totally thought that when I read "mixtape" too.

      We are practically soul mates, I swear!


      • bluebird.
        September 10
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        Marry me?


        • nicki1
          September 10
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          I was under the impression that we were already engaged.

          • bluebird.
            September 10
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            Ooh, yes. And at our wedding, we'll force everyone to listen to every single song of every single album by Brand New

            • nicki1
              September 10
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              YES.

              Including the ones that they didn't release properly. And all the covers that they've done. Pretty much anytime they've been recorded!

              • bluebird.
                September 10
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                Best. wedding. ever.

                And horrible people with horrible taste who don't like them won't be allowed to complain

                • nicki1
                  September 10
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                  Yeah, if anyone complains they will be sent from the wedding and receive no cake! (The cake is going to be immense so that will be a pretty bad punishment.)


                  • bluebird.
                    September 10
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                    Our cake should be in the shape of Jesse's face!

                    • nicki1
                      September 10
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                      That is a brilliant idea. I knew there was a good reason why I'm marrying you!

                      Also, I bet Lukey loves this.

                      • bluebird.
                        September 10
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                        Yay, so I'm not just your last resort because people in Wales smell funky?

                        I'm sure that somewhere deep, deep, deep, deep down he is in love with Brand New, and he really appreciates us conversing about it on his poem

                        • nicki1
                          September 10
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                          Of course not! Damn the earth and oceans that separates us!

                          Yes, I think so too.

                          And I'm sick of your tattoos and the way you don't appreciate Brand New

                          You made me think of that. Except I don't think he has any tattoos. We're back to Mixtape!


                          • bluebird.
                            September 10
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                            I'm sinking like a stone in the sea.

                            And you made me think of that


                            • nicki1
                              September 10
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                              I'm burning like a bridge for your body

                              His voice in Tautou is like a massage for my ears.


                              • bluebird.
                                September 10
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                                In Guernica, as well.

                                I love it when I quote lyrics and people understand (:

                                • nicki1
                                  September 10
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                                  Mmm, yes.
                                  Apparently the new album is a lot more aggressive, though.

                                  Me too. And I can guarantee that if you ever quote Brand New lyrics I will understand!


                                  • bluebird.
                                    September 10
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                                    This is going to be a long and happy marriage, and they will be beautiful even in aggression <3


                                  • Luken gold member
                                    September 10
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                                    ...

                                    Get a room. I keep getting updates about you fuckers talking to each other.


  • nicki1
    September 8

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    Different.

    "but we
    keep it on repeat
    because the lyrics have
    a lesson to teach."

    Mmm. I love that.


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