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Ripped out of a Notebook (Lyrics)

[Verse1]
Forget everything that was said
Start with a new page
You can't erase what happened
It's still there. Smudged and smeared.
But if I take a step back.
I'm just as confused as I was before.

[Chorus]
Do I like him?
Well, I don't really know.
How do I find out?
My mind says stop, my heart says go.
I told myself this wouldn't happen.
But that's not really workin' out.

[Verse2]
Forget everything that I said.
I got it all wrong the first time.
I can't just let this go.
It's eating me from inside.
But I'm stepping back.
To be just as confused as before

[Chorus]
Do I like him?
Well, I don't really know.
How do I find out?
My mind says stop, my heart says go.
I told myself this wouldn't happen.
But that's not really workin' out.

[Verse3]
Maybe it doesn't explain much
But it explains it all.
You've got to look in between the lines.
There's not much left to say.
I don't where I'm going with this.
But I'm still just as confused as before.

[Chorus]
Do I like him?
Well, I don't really know.
How do I find out?
My mind says stop, my heart says go.
I told myself this wouldn't happen.
But that's not really workin' out.

[Bridge]
Yes, no, Maybe so.
This isn't a riddle. I'm still caught in the middle.
Give me an answer, please. I'm getting weak in the knees.
I just need to know if I'm worth giving up.


[Chorus]
Do I like him?
Well, I don't really know.
How do I find out?
My mind says stop, my heart says go.
I told myself this wouldn't happen.
But that's not really workin' out.
(And I wish I could stop it.)
But that's not really workin' out.


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  • Miss Chievous
    September 12
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    awesome!(as always!!!!!) Very emotional! Why are you soooo good! Keep writing!!

  • JToddUnderhill
    September 9

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    Hello...

    Are you in a band. If not I truly think you should find one. You are quite talented and I would be a fan from the start. I would also invite you to play the music festival we are doing this week, and then again next year "Freedom Music Fesival" I have read and imagined how two of your songs have been now and I would like to say you need to grab your dreams and strap in for one hell of a ride. Keep up the good work!