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Walking on Sunshine

Wishing upon the stars above
Always and forever we will be
Learning to love all over again
Kaleidoscope my soul into yours
Independently our love will grow over time
Nature taking its course
Gathering all our moments in my head.

Obvious for all to see
Now it is time for you to open your eyes.

Sleeping in my dreams
Unique moments shared between you and I
Never thought love would find me again
Sharing quiet times in life
Hear me loud and clear
In our life we are one, we are inseparable
Next to you I am free
Excuse me while I walk on sunshine.

Yvonne J. Griffin
9-8-09

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  • angelica silver member
    September 18

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    Dear Yvonne, may I should go back through your poems to see where this love came into your life. It sounds pretty serious to me and if so I'm very happy for you. I gather he's one of the Firemen hmmm.....
    Love Joan


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    September 9

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    This is cute Sista gurl. I wouldn't mind taking a walk like this one with you beside one of those "firemen" you were supposed to send me ......... lmao Glad to see you again, i miss you. Your poems always seem to make me smile.