don't know the way
it takes too long
come here my friend
and join my song
I'll show you things
you've never seen
just look around
take it from me
in this city
I won't land
I'll fly up high
just take my hand
I'll lead you through
the world below
the streets are clear
till you get down low
don't ya worry now,
just run on through
these clouds are here
they'll carry you
forget it, oh
don't run and hide
I'll show you this,
your city wide
the people here
they look so small
from way up high
new worlds so tall
be careful then
and don't-ya get lost
when you come on down
high from our loft
don't ya worry now,
just run on through
these clouds are here
they'll carry you
forget it, oh
don't run and hide
I'll show you this,
your city wide
A contest entry
- Angles and Airwaves by Brlsbb.
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Comments
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ooo i like this, it reminds me of something that jason maraz would say ^^
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Nice, Nice
As I said before, I really like this. Nice thoughts about being over the cite and looking down. Often if we take the high road, the "people down below" look small because they and their way is small. And, from up high you get a better picture of the whole thing, the "city wide." This is nice and smooth and can't wait to hear the music that will go with it. Good job, Vron.
GP Paul
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