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Fears and Worry

What are your fears
What is it you worry
Take your time
You don't have to hurry
You said you wouldn't tell
This secrete you keep
Because you're afraid
That i would leave
That I'll change my mind
And walk away
But soon you'll find
I'm here to stay
So tell me your worries
And tell me your fears
I'll stand in front of a jury
A jury of my peers
To let you know I care
I promise to you
Trust me if you dare
This is your cue
Start to speak
Spill your heart
Let it leak
Rip it apart
Every thought
Every word
Give it a shot
Let it be heard
So what are your fears
What is it you worry
Take your time
You don't have to hurry

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  • RomeoKapulet
    September 8

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    This may be one of my favorites from you. Then again I'm somewhat biased cause it flows like something I would write. Rhyme and flow was perfect from beginning to end. Very well written and I love the repeated lines


    • JustaDreamer257
      September 8
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      wow really? becaus ei didnt think i di it that well..and i did it qucik too but thank you!! YOU HAVE GOOD TASTE IF I MAY SAY SO MYSELF