Cast upon the moon
all alone
she hung there upon the tip
unable and unwilling to move.
As time goes by
she swings her legs
and gazes upon the earth.
Oh so lovely she thinks
Then worries
as she soon realizes
that the day will soon begin.
Cast upon the moon
all alone
she hung there upon the tip
unable and unwilling to move.
As time goes by
she swings her legs
and gazes upon the earth.
Oh so lovely she thinks
Then worries
as she soon realizes
that the day will soon begin.
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this is very different a girl on the moon LOL
I likes it ... the day to begin and she doesn't want it too... this can leave the reader thinking many different things.. x DD
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little and nicer
when the day begin she will be unseen
very well penned
hi trekker girl! how are you?
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wow
i've heard of 'the man on the moon' but not the girl on the moon! makes me automatically MORE interested in those stories now! l.o.l. 
loved the imagery you conjured up in this my friend..good pen, keep the ink flowing!
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i give you an A+ you did a wonderful job keep up the great work
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wow this is beautiful, i am simply in love with this piece, it's so simple but weaves such a beautiful poem, i love it, and i love the picture it was written about, just wow
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Very nice take on the picture. I do like the picture you've written for, I wish I could draw like that Neatly done, keep up the great work!
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