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The Wolf

The eyes of the wolf hypnotize me
The soul of the wolf is all I see
The scent of the wolf draws me near
The sound of the wolf is so clear
The touch of the wolf is ecstasy
The wolf is the passion inside of me

Emotions as sure as the ocean's tides
I'm on the most thrilling of rides
I race through the wood
Not knowing if I really should
On the heels of the majestic beast
And toward a future I fear the least

The heart of the wolf is what I desire
The gaze of the wolf sets me on fire
Emotions I've never felt before
Emotions I thought to be mythical lore

Trust in me my furry friend
This is an adventure I never want to end

Can you feel it? This little four letter word that wants to pop out of my mouth every time I look at him....it terrifies me. It exhilerates me...can you feel it?

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  • Coldwater
    September 16

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    A breath taking read, very atmospheric, "... majestic beast..." sums up the wolf very nicely.
    Regards.

  • Topnotchsy
    September 15
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    Wolves are stunning animals, and there's so much about them that is beautiful and intriguing. Nice write here.


  • xeroabyss II
    September 8

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    I've always thought of love as a animal often times (when i wasnt refering it to a nasty crystal meth like addiction), but you're penned it in a positive light.
    Like a cuddly, adorable little pup to be your hearts companion, not a ferocious predator stalking its soft flesh to fest on.
    Nice write.