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All strung out

Weak from the lesson
Tiredness looms
Guitar on lap
Worn out blues
Snooze

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  • chelseacec
    November 8
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    heh. i can relate to that!


  • YerGreatestDwnfall
    October 16
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    short. simple. paints a picture. much enjoyed


  • penman gold member
    October 15
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    Wonderful

    Great choice or words. Was kind of hard to read, but still great just the same. Thank you for sharing