She pulled the trigger,
Is this a crime?
Was it okay to go,
Before her time?
She hated her life,
So the deed was done.
Now it's all over,
Death had won.
Is she happier now,
That she's longer here?
I truly hope so,
I miss having her near.
In a list
A contest entry
- Everyone wins -crime in rhyme this time. by Keith E. Gerber.
700 points, ended September 11, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only rhyme prewrite contest by Ami.
550 points, ended October 1, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow this is pretty good great rhyme and flow congrats on the bronze you have so far great write
Thank you so much for entering and good luck
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Good write!
I would like to remind you that I am only picking the poems in the order that I favor them. I do not believe that I am qualified to judge poetry on any other basis, rhyme, timing etcetera. I like this poem though very much. This is a very well written poem. Thank you for entering my contest.
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This is by far one of the best ive read today.
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I really like the rhymes.
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