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this one touched my heart
i just felt so much love and pain in this one
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Wow I wasn't expecting this. You took to the prompt to another level. From the chains of prison to the chains of the heart and then you connected the chains of the soul to the dearly departed. Very cool take on the prompt. Something about the Blues and prison kinda goes together like Pizza and Beer. Heheheh
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
Bill
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Very well done
It was deep in emotions and spending time down Atlanta way a few years back. I got it. Later Gator, Damn good job!
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I thought it was smooth and not meant to be flawless
if you ever listened to a southern drawl it is not flawless
it scratches and pulls upon metaphors thus the drawl...
so I thought you did it -flawless-
actually!
It is a beauty of a poem and I adored how you turned
the chains into a bond of love.
For history has proven (painfully) there ain't no chains
that can keep down a mans bold spirit and soul!
way to write!
ears/Seattle
It was truly touching to the heart!
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Quill,
Being a fan of the "Delta Blues" this piece strikes a chord with me.
I'm sure this is a personal testimony, which adds to the overall impact of the piece.
Bravo,
Drybones
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Thanks for commenting, it's just a story, just springing from the competition prompt
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This Is A Good Write,
I Enjoyed It.
You Shoud Write Out The Words On Here Though, Cause Man Youtube Can Be Annoying Sometimes.
I Agree With Sue About "The Southern Drawl", It Did Seem A Bit Forced In Places.
But Overall It Was Very Good.
Well Done.
Bianca Adeva Melody.
Xxx
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A good story, well told, but I'm not sure about the southern drawl ... it seemed a bit forced in places.
It was a heart wrenching poem, with all the right ingredients to make the reader sigh.
All the best in the contest.
Sue
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