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Not Funny

i have no use for tone
imposed upon
words fallen flat
beneath my tongue
their meaning lost
in the thoughts that gurgle
from the back of my throat

in the viscosity of saliva
i have transmuted
intents of humor and love
into the mocking belief
that i know you
or have known you
or that i know

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  • Yemassee gold member
    September 8

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    You say it this way, "I am sorry." I know, guys have trouble with that word. I only know if from the dictionary myself! It's also easy for us to try to pass of our callous remarks with a laugh. And as you know, it never works, not if it's the other sex we are conversing with at least.


    • bozoloper
      September 8

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      haha, you know it's a fine line between teasing and seriously insulting someone's life style. especially when they're the "other sex."


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 8

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    Whoa! Drama intervenes
    in the smooth course of life,
    disrupting the funny...
    with flat, dull tones
    or so it seems.


    • bozoloper
      September 8
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      haha, well, if i could keep my mouth shut i wouldn't have so much practice at apologizing.

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