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The Beats of Life ...



string music of dark bruising
seems so silent but amusing
and those blind to sound
shall not see what they have found

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Prompt: "Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

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  • ChrissyJean
    October 13

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    This is really cute and has great form but just isn't what I'm looking for. Thanks for entering.

  • siahaan
    September 9
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    thank you miraa
    that is very nice of you

  • Bob Fox
    September 9

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    Poet

    seems a sort of a riddle. But for the love of music I smile. I wonder? where would our crazy world be without the beauty of music. Save the rap crap. lol


  • donnz
    September 8

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    Not all are 'deaf, keeping time with a differant drummer.

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