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A Delinquent Dreamer..



Its sunset time~
In my hammock, I lie
in solitude,
Staring at the endless skies..
As if the royal ruby gates have opened wide,
Shades of grandiloquent red, spreading across the blue..
I sigh..
For, it's yet an other day that's passed through
One full day, that's glided by
And I have done nothing still-
None, No- not one..
My dreams, unchased
And the ones I chased were undreamt of..
The sun has swept, sparing no light
And there's an ache at the corner of my heart..
~  That an other day is spent and that
'am left to the mercy of the moonlit night..





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Prompt: Sunset Confessions

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  • Pineom1
    November 9
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    Keep It Up

    Truly expresses we should cherish each day we have because life is short.

  • Bob Fox
    September 17

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    My

    Poet just wonderful. And perhaps a reminder that we should saviour each and every day. It's beauty on displkay.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 9

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    Excellent! I don't know how many times I have felt like this. You seem to have penned about a place I am at right now! Your peom has excellent flow and rhyme and love the emotion the comes from it.
    Thank you so much for your entry
    Gaylene