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Sometimes it's morning

 

 

 

 

 

This bed full of me

is idling the night away.

 

 

      I saw those red leds

      beaming 3.52 am once too many,

      so I gave them -

        after redecorating their plastic peel

        with a hammer -

      new life in the bin.

 

 

Although,

with thoughts lingering

through empty afterhours,

I keep in mind

that sometimes it's morning

                    at 6 am.

 

 

   (Oh yes,

    I know how glorious sunrise is,

           how artful it seems to colour snow

       and how poetically the birds

               resonate in a distance.)

 

 

   But I tend to forget,

     just like I forgot

     how to switch off the subtitles

     reading from my eyes

     when near you.

 

 

And I don't feel sorry

   (in every aspect of the word);

 

I just feel,

             for you.

 

 

 

 

 

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How wonderful to wake up at 6 am when sleeping over somewhere...

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  • poet2angels gold member
    September 14

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    I had to read this after reading part 2 of it..
    I am so glad I did.
    I run out of ways to say how amazing your poetic voice is

    Lynda


  • Mari Goes gold member
    September 11

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    Your poem made me smile!!!
    For some reason I stopped the read (the read ended, for me) on 'near you'. I'm picking my ends lol
    Seriously, a smiling poem this is.
    Hou van jou


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    September 8

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    awww yayayayayay! we haven't talked in a few days but this sounds like things are going nicely me so happy for you lea-bum
    llove this write, you are wonderful as always

    dikke knuffle
    Tasha


  • Peteskid gold member
    September 8

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    many ways to greet the morning, and those most thoughtful and inviting hours; when everything might be still An unplanned departure from sleep is like a bonus of a day or night. Very nice here, thoughtful; and for me the subtitles often fade from notice when I focus on the unfolding story...PK


  • rollingzen
    September 8
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    good stuff


  • laura0757 gold member
    September 8

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    i thought this to be a different but really cool poem, excuse the expression, if its a tad old in today youger crowd. but I love the word cool to describe something I like and i did like this one...very muc


  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 8

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    wonderful indeed. i love the feeling you create with responses provided to the ready answers one might expect waking in such fashion and mood. i am so pleased to have stopped on this piece for a read. nicely done.

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