cliff-
hanging life
pyramid's zenith
shows the waiting future
the new day beams its blood in blush
piercing desert's gaping wound a golden ray
excites the stone-heart * white dove throbbing love
Author notes
Prompt: Pyramid, 30 words
This is the landscape seen by my spiritual eye
In a list
A contest entry
- SUPER Quickie #2 for those who missed first one by islekine.
490 points, ended September 8, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"This is the landscape seen by my spiritual eye." And a dramatically sweeping and beautiful vision it is! I know nothing about the spiritual qualities of pyramids, but your words enchant this reader.
Excellent,
Bill
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This is beautiful Myra. Golden in my book. I too, am a very spiritual person. The pyramid is symbolic of many things. All the best in the contest.
Love
Mariana
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Thank you, Mariana ...
I appreciate you reading my work. X
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Very creative!
Nicely out of the box!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on!
and
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Thank you for the Bronze on this contest ...
but this trophy should go to Penman, for he focused my attention on the word count. LOL I was so eager to enter, that I just penned away at high speed, not counting any words.
Blessings to you and thank you for the opportunity.
Love
Myra
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Awesome form poetry!
You don't see that too often on here!
Wonderful penned!
Good luck in the contest!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All
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Thank you!
And congratulations on your Gold. You sure do know about the algebra of love, and that sometimes it just does not add up!
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Wonderful
Such a terrific use of from. And so very creative with beautiful wording. best of luck in the contest
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Thank you, Co-poet ...
for getting me there. LOL Passion often rules my mind.
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A beautiful landscape indeed here! Beautiful work and I love your presentation here. All the best to you in this contest and thanks for sharing it!
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Thank you, Jeremy ...
and congratulations on your Silver!
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You are very welcome and congrats on your bronze dear! Take care!
Jeremy
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