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reach me

when letter and verbage
turn to digit and limb
length in sentence
becoming the reach
pulling me up
and out
from the inside
laying open
    displayed
turned again, into myself
folded soft pages
ink running
in streams
cornered leaflets tremble
as language
    breathes
          life

projectile spewing thoughts

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  • Topnotchsy
    September 15
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    Nice write here. Thought provoking.


  • individuality gold member
    September 10

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    a good poem, ah spill the ink and laugh like well, someone laughing i suppose, let the moments twist you into those mental times, coloured with wonderous shapes of love for art. failing that, have a


  • Griswold silver member
    September 8

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    Nicely done, we do lay our soul bare to the world when we write. The pages all fresh and newly inked. Hoping against hope that someone will understand our joy or pain. Close not the book nor mar the crisp edges for there is much more to be written... Scott