Why can't he be one dimensional?
Tired of uncovering layers of secrets,
Hate discovering different sides to the tales.
These angles don't add up.
He's got his math all wrong.
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Prompt: Pyramid
30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- SUPER Quickie #2 for those who missed first one by islekine.
490 points, ended September 8, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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The title is awesome.
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wonderfully done, creative and imaginative. congrats on the gold.
nice work.
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love it!! lol love the ttile congrats on the gold
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Congratulations to you on your gold here! A truly deserving write and I love your title as well as the contents in this one. Keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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Thanks, Jer!
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Wonderful take on the prompt. I see we both focused on the dimensions of a pyramid. Congrats on the well deserved Gold.
Mariana
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Thank you so much!
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Wow reminds me of my ex.
You did great!
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lol
Thanks!
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Ah!
The different angles of love often brings us to a turning point!
Love
Myra
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Very creative take!
Thanks so much for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
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This is great my dear! It's always a pleasure to read you here. I hope that you do well with this one and thanks for sharing your thoughts with me tonight. Good luck!
Jeremy0826
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Wonderful
Oh my great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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