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Not just me.

Woe, is me
No, not me
It just
Can't be
That I'm
Alone
No one
But me
It just
Can't be
I can't
Won't see
Reality
It hurts
To think
That it's
Only me

I'll change my mind
And then I'll find
A hole that I'll
Just crawl inside

A comfort zone
I'm not alone
You might be real
I'm not alone

Author notes

Notes are... bleh.

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  • jessifer1792
    November 15
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    "I can't
    Won't see
    Reality"


    hmm. I'm very much a fan.

  • Kimmiee65
    November 2
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    Great lines! I like the flow of it all. The depth. It made me really think too. Great stuff.


  • AbundantBetrayals
    September 10
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    i really like the flow of this poem and the word choice; i really like the style of the short quick lines
    well done
    ~Betrayals


  • internal heights
    September 7

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    Wow I really like this. You have this sort of rhythmn/ rhyme scheme that is cool and definately new to me. The two or three syllable lines seem almost like a chant you're repeating to yourself to convince yourself of the last two stanzas.

    -Nice write.


    • Magnetic Storm
      September 8
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      Thanks. I figured it might have been one of those writes you wouldn't understand unless you were the one writing it. Well, in reality it is, but you seem to have caught on to it (not a suprise).

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