Questions repeat over and over in my mind
like scenes of some play.
Confusion leads to understanding
still no answer is found.
A touch of your lips to mine
Souls intertwine
hearts beating as one
Love
written in sand
is an answer all of its own.
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1200 points, ended September 18, 15 entries
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this is cute... absolute pleasure to read hun welldone on the HM
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thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. I especially love the last lines:
"Love
written in sand
is an answer all of its own."
that's magic!!
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beautiful poem filled with soft imagery. I enjoyed reading this. excellent job
Good Luck
Kat
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Such a wonderful write, the imagery is soft and tender. I do like the ending, such uplifting emotions throughout. Superbly penned, much luck in the contest tho you really shouldn't need it with this little gem!
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD, BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST
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Beautiful hun
I awe in the sweetness of your thoughts
and how you brought softness to life within your words
Good luck and best wishes
Julie
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